A poem for Rose Moxon image
Words can not really describe the image completely its so moving.
I hope you enjoy it as much as I have and enjoy my feeble attempt to share my thoughts on this image.
Very nice Rose and very loving !
Check out her lovely and creative works here:!Rose!
“My Love will stay”
I think of you my love oh so far away.
I read your letters that come each day and cry at what they say.
It’s been a year since you were here and I lie in your arms.
And now its dark and I am alone your letters keep me warm.
I need the comfort of your words to help me through the night.
For without one small ray of hope I would surely die.
I see from all your lovely words you love me more each day.
And I for you have gone unchanged my love is ever true.
I miss you so my heart is broke it cry’s a long hard cry.
I know your thoughts are with me, each and every night.
But words of comfort often fail when needs are on the edge.
I miss you love my words can’t say the hurt I feel inside.
But soon I know you’ll come back home and lie down by my side.
I’ll think of you each day your gone and wait for each new post.
And read your words of love to me to comfort my lonely heart.
Clive
Once again, very fitting words David, so very well done my friend
David Roman replied
Thank you Clive glad you like it its a deep piece of work she’s done here very lovely and sad.
Agnes McGuinness
It is indeed a very powerful and moving image. You have certainly captured this in your poem. I think this is one of your best, David. I love it. Agnes xx
David Roman replied
Your so right about that my friend the image is outstanding.
Words just came it was so moving.
Glad you loved it that touches me thank you Agnes.
helene ruiz
fabulous!!
David Roman replied
Thank you Helene you make me smile!
merlin67
Oh wow – brilliant poem and a very moving image.
David Roman replied
Well thank you M67 I guess that was the what was it that you used to describe what what drives me to create a poem ? Humm you had a certain word.Oh Trigger that was it! I guess that was the trigger! Very nice trigger wasn’t it?
naturelover
Stirring!!! the moving image and the beautiful words you have put to it David- I agree-your best yet!!! Powerful stuff xx
David Roman replied
Really? well thats very kind of you NL thanks a lot!
Roses work is wonderful as we all know.
Romo
The image is fantastic and this poem works very well with the image..good job to you both:)
David Roman replied
Oh my thats very kind of you my friend thank you so much!
Mindy McGregor
Beautiful work David and great image!!!!
David Roman replied
The image is super I think you know her work here on RB its super! Glad you like it Mindy!
Janis Zroback
Very beautiful image and words to match…lovely work David…
David Roman replied
Thank you Janis thats very nice the image was outstanding so it was easy to see and feel her hurt and love.
Judi Taylor
Rose’s artwork is always very touching. However with the addition of your poem the feeling moves deeper into the being. There is a softness to the rhythmn of the verse that brings the feeling from simmer to boil. We can feel what you write, David. And that is remarkable!
David Roman replied
Oh thats very nice my friend thanks a lot.
Kate Adams
Fabulous piece David!! very moving.
David Roman replied
Thank you Kate thats very nice of you.
karen Bradshaw
What beautiful words my friend, and her work is beautiful xxxx
David Roman replied
Hey Karen thanks a lot
Yool
Exellent my friend and the picture is to!!!!!
David Roman replied
Yes she made a really nice picture its wonderful thanks Yool
Sharon House
Beautiful image – very touching words, so full of emotion. I can feel the loneliness and need. Hopefully they might be reunited in their love very soon. Great David.
David Roman replied
Thank you my friend thats very nice of you to feel that!
noinvisiblehand
love…one of the deepest mysteries, one of the most talked about things
David Roman replied
It comes from deep within our hearts its blood within our veins with out its ever stirring presence we would surely die in vain.
Beve Brown-Clark
Incredible poem…words so perfect for Rose’s work….you are such a romantic…:^)
David Roman replied
Yea I guess your right I just like to feel other peoples souls and use it to share my heart ! Glad you like the poem its a really warm and loving poem I think.
I think I felt what shes feeling at some time in my life so it was easy to be in that room and cry and hope and wait!
Hope to see ya again and have a super New Year my friend!
Beve Brown-Clark
Yes…we have all walked down that road…Happy New Years to you and yours…wishing you the best for 2009! :^)
David Roman
Thanks a lot Beve you and yours too!
kreesor
Wonderful accompanying poem David!! You even seemed to capture that the longing was actually driving her crazy!!
David Roman replied
Thanks K I was sitting in that room broken hearted at one time in my life and remembered what it felt like.
Glad you liked it an Happy New Year and be safe too!
Rose Moxon
muah! fabulous stuff david!
David Roman replied
Rose,
You created a moving an wonderful image to fall into. Full of deep love and profound hurt.
Your a magic weaver my friend full of dreams you bring to us isn’t that just wonderful!
Thank you for sharing a part of your soul with us.
No one can make an image so profound without having loved and cried and died inside.
See ya soon I hope.
mikequigley
Beautiful work – MQ
David Roman replied
Thanks Mike thats very nice.
Kim Bender
This is so special!! The words are touching and go so well with the wonderful painting!!
David Roman replied
Your so kind my friend thank you so much!