Theogenesis

in
our own
image
we created
our Creator
moulded Him
out of the flesh
and bones
of our dreams

  • Karen  Tillotson

    Karen Tillotson

    Very interesting….you have spoken volumes in 19 words…and I daresay millions would agree…great writing Elucidate!

  • Elucidate replied

    Thank you, Karen.

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    awesome work man

  • Elucidate replied

    Thanks, Shoaib.

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    I’m with you there Jordan :-)

  • Elucidate replied

    Glad to have you with me, Matt.

  • erika15

    erika15

    Your poems just blow me away….this one is just insane….You’re on a roll today. Have to favorite this one as well. :)

  • Elucidate replied

    Thanks, my friend. I was hoping to blow some minds today ;) I’ve written one more – Deicide. It’s a companion piece to this. I’ll upload it later.

  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    it’s a great thought, really.. creating the creator, making him to be what we desire him to be or think he should be, we all do that in our own ways, even if we deny that ‘he’ exists..

  • Elucidate replied

    Though we may twist and mould God to our own image and ideals, the underlying spirituality remains the same.

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Absolutely superb.

  • Elucidate replied

    Thank you!

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