Hotel Room
I have listened to my song too much.. and I felt the need to write a bit of my dark side.
I AM DEEPLY HONORED THAT A GREAT ARTIST HERE HAS BEEN INSPIRED TO CREATE THIS IMAGE THAT GOES BEYOND FITTING THIS POEM.. IT SEEMS TO HAVE ALSO SPARKED ANOTHER VISION OF WRITING FOR ME…
DANILO LEJARDI
I so appreciate this work and you.
Hotel Room
Hotel Room belongs to the following groups:
Complex Simplicity of Art, Core [C.O.R.E], Deep Within, Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Light In The Darkness, Nirvana (1 images per day and 1 written per day), The Art of Intrigue 2/24, The Healing Journey, THE SISTERHOOD and Up & Coming WritersI have cast images of myself
In this old hotel.
I have squandered my flesh
In dreams unrealized and fates
Never before allowed,
Here in this place of groveling for substance
I see a dark horse and a man who rides
He is clean and well mannered like a batman
Out of his cave,
Venturing for all the good of a life
Bouts enslave
Dark hotel curtains keeping out the false
Light of others.
Here inside I ask myself to turn over and
Over again
So I can feel the sheets of my whimpering
I can feel the bedposts that deliver a truce
And inside this place all manner of subjects
Are embraced
Are explored
And are loved too.
Like a nerve’s beginning and ending all at
Once,
I fly with a secret of longing to touch all of me
To kiss my wounds that have festered in the
Hollow light of day.
And I sleep in a waking sense of deliverance
That my mind will allow this to become
Just a garden of joy,
Just a way to be known
Here in this dark hotel I call my own.
Linaji 2009
Solomon Walker
pleasure to read great writing, from start to ending, its filled with drama! would make a great video – especially with music treatment…
linaji replied
I am so up for that Solomon.. some images.. sensual.. and abstract too. .. you look great btw in your new icon!
Amber Elizabet...
very beautiful… many hug and a blessings and
PS lol still waiting on the picture for collaboration you wonderful busy sis hussssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
love ya Lina xxx
linaji replied
tee hee thanks so much Amber.. and I will send.. looking and found yesterday.. under different title I had it.. so I could not find the original.. will send soon…xoxoxoo
linaji replied
sweetheart.. thanks for the fav!!
coppertrees
Wonderful words and a great way of saying them
linaji replied
Hi Vicki.. wow thanks so much. xox
Cindy RN
Dear LIna, beautifully written :)
linaji replied
Oh Cindy.. do I have to be in my dirty little hotel room to find you? Just kidding.. I appreciate the fav and you.. we are so connected sometimes and it feels good.
Sally Omar
Absolutely beautiful!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Ushna Sardar
beautifully written sweet lina! huggles xo
linaji replied
sista Ushna.. thank you so much for the fav and for the constant presence of someone who I admire greatly..xoxo
dawndavies
fabulous linaji,dawnx
Gregory John O...
Good read !!!! So what is the room number ???
Linda Ridpath
great imagery!! x
BiographyofRed8
really strong writing, from a really strong person..!
aspectsoftmk
strong powerful writing…draw the curtains and sleep…xoxo
Andrew Price
Well done! Very good! x
Teresa P. Pelaez
Fabulous lina!!!
Astoreth
love you Lina. i relate. xx
linaji replied
yum to your love.. I needed that this am..
VanSnuG
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ….
linaji replied
now you’ve gone and done it!! thanks for the fave too… hummmmmmmoxoxxo
C J Lewis
Excellent writing Linaji :)xoxox
michael byerley
wonderfully written !!!!!
Cherubtree
Very good Hon..you make the room come alive!!
kreesor
Fantastic writing!! Sleep deliver me unto dreams!! :)
kjgordon
_Knock…....knock…........................room service