The Holding Spell

WarOfTheRoses
Author: WarOfTheRoses
Word Count: 372
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The Holding Spell

This is a record of what happened.

The Holding Spell belongs to the following groups:

All About Your Best Work and All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical

In her spare time
she practices magic
but not the kind
you see on TV.
To the best of my knowledge
she can’t do card tricks,
saw people in half,
or make coins disappear.

To get warmed up
she’ll exert dominion over nature
start an Autumn squall
just to shake things up a bit.
Then across the city
doors slam
windows rattle
and she’ll carelessly point out
that it was all her doing.
(in case you hadn’t noticed)

For the main act
she warps space-time,
so disregard your clocks.
They’re of no use to you now.

Then she makes her hands
as big as my body
and covers me everywhere
all at once -
her hips become
infinitely curvy
her breasts become
impossibly steep
until, eventually
there’s nothing left to grab
and nothing left to do
except fall
all the way down
to the bottom of her.

For her next trick
she possesses me entirely
and all I can do is watch
and wait
while she invokes a storm.
This is the best part:

Branches disembark
gracelessly
from trees
and smash their way
into people’s sitting-rooms
via the ceiling.

Cars tumble through streets
end over end
setting off alarms
and greatly pissing off
dogs and insurance companies
but for different reasons

Then she says “Hold me!”
This is the Spell of Holding.
It’s completely safe
as long as you don’t let go.

“Love me!” she commands
This is the Spell of Loving.
This one’s more dangerous
but far more impressive.

“Imagine me” she orders
This is the spell of impossible futures
and I have to imagine us
drunk,
giddy,
between destinations
somewhere in Italy.
Rome probably,
throwing coins in the fountain.

Then I dream us
into a sea-side cottage
somewhere in the world,
without a television
or a radio
because we really don’t care
what happens to other people.

Next she’ll cast:
- The Spell of Disappearing
- The Spell of Unwelcoming Shadows
- The Spell of Imposed Echoes
In no particular order

and I’ll un-throw the coins,
un-visit the fountain,
un-live in the cottage,
wipe the benches,
and do the dishes;
this is called House-keeping.

  • greeneyes

    greeneyes

    wow – what a spell

  • tjsnow

    tjsnow

    That is the kind of magic anyone can believe in. This was beautiful. Great writing and great descriptions. Much Praise.

  • WarOfTheRoses replied

    thanks :) I believe in it…

  • Cathleen Tarawhiti

    Cathleen Taraw...

    That is brilliant!

  • Alison Edwards
  • Anni Morris

    Anni Morris

    Thoughtful and skillful piece of writing :) ~ Anni

  • Andrea Searle

    Andrea Searle

    I enjoyed reading this

  • nnimus3

    nnimus3

    it wasn’t til the second time I read this that I got it… awesome.

  • whitelikeblack

    whitelikeblack

    wow I really love this
    simple but briliant

  • Photomojo

    Photomojo

    I love this….. I almost feel like getting off my duff and go clean my house! I think I am going to go vacuum! LOL!!!

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    I know these0spells

  • James Austin

    James Austin

    Very nice piece, I had to go over it twice to understand,
    but when i did, everything clicked into place.
    I dont often clean the house, but I do help mum a lot,
    and that helped me understand.

    Great writing, keep it up
    - James Austin

  • pennybird

    pennybird

    Deep true magic resists words but you found them. Thank you.

  • xxfaithxx

    xxfaithxx

    hmm almost had to read that backwards!

  • Flic Manning

    Flic Manning

    Wow – that was well done, felt like I was being sucked into the story backwards!

  • Cheyenne

    Cheyenne

    Awsome! Great writing! :)

  • CrimsonLotus

    CrimsonLotus

    Beautiful

  • palmeravery

    palmeravery

    This is very good. Great fun.

  • Synchronism

    Synchronism

    brilliant

  • ToniTiger

    ToniTiger

    very awesome spells keep writting

  • Quinn Blackburn

    Quinn Blackburn

    Enchanting wordcrafting! Beautifully woven

    :) wishing you laughter

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